雅思写作2
小作文
开头段
线性图 the graph/ the line chart
柱状图 the bar chart
饼图 the pie chart
动词
shows=illustrates
不用抄below
数据对象
- 数值和百分比都可以用 the figure for 固定搭配
- 数值 the number of 或者 the amount of
百分比 the proportion of 或者 the percentage of 或者 the share of

地点和时间
先地点后时间


overview
overall,over/during this period,while the number of X decreased, the popularity of X increased to varying degrees ,with ultimately/largely becoming the most favored /popular / preferred choice
升降和极值
主体段

主体段要写两个
第一个主体段,要用as seen/observed+句子
从中心句到细节描写
in detail +句子
to be specific
两个项目的连续
相似的趋势 similarly
不同 by/in contrast

分词结构更加分
完整句子,and then
after which
before doing
followed by 词组
先跟别人比高低
account for highest proportion
占据多少比例
relatively相对
再跟自己比趋势

小练习:
the graph illustrates the changes in the amount of fish and three kinds of meat consumed per person per week in particular nation of Europe from 1979 to 2004
overall, during this period ,the figure for beef,lamb,fish saw a drop to varying degrees,while the consumption of chicken increases,with chicken ultimately becoming the most popular choice
主体段
开头结尾写
as seen, chicken became more favored
specially,the amount of chicken was initially slightly lower than that of lamb ,showing an upward trend from about 140 grams per person per week in 1979 to around 200 grams per person per week in 1989,overtaking that of beef
it rose rapidly to almost 250 grams per person per week in 2004,becoming the dominant food
however,the amount of beef and lamb consumed showed downward trend
in detail ,the consumption of beef was initially the highest,standing at about 225grams per person per week,increasing
similarly
intake= consumption
overtake 相交