小作文

开头段

线性图 the graph/ the line chart

柱状图 the bar chart

饼图 the pie chart

动词

shows=illustrates

不用抄below

数据对象

  1. 数值和百分比都可以用 the figure for 固定搭配
  2. 数值 the number of 或者 the amount of

百分比 the proportion of 或者 the percentage of 或者 the share of

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地点和时间

先地点后时间

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overview

overall,over/during this period,while the number of X decreased, the popularity of X increased to varying degrees ,with ultimately/largely becoming the most favored /popular / preferred choice

升降和极值

主体段

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主体段要写两个

第一个主体段,要用as seen/observed+句子

从中心句到细节描写

in detail +句子

to be specific

两个项目的连续

相似的趋势 similarly

不同 by/in contrast

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分词结构更加分

完整句子,and then

after which

before doing

followed by 词组

先跟别人比高低

account for highest proportion

占据多少比例

relatively相对

再跟自己比趋势

 

小练习:

the graph illustrates the changes in the amount of fish and three kinds of meat consumed per person per week in particular nation of Europe from 1979 to 2004

overall, during this period ,the figure for beef,lamb,fish saw a drop to varying degrees,while the consumption of chicken increases,with chicken ultimately becoming the most popular choice

主体段

开头结尾写

as seen, chicken became more favored

specially,the amount of chicken was initially slightly lower than that of lamb ,showing an upward trend from about 140 grams per person per week in 1979 to around 200 grams per person per week in 1989,overtaking that of beef

it rose rapidly to almost 250 grams per person per week in 2004,becoming the dominant food

however,the amount of beef and lamb consumed showed downward trend

in detail ,the consumption of beef was initially the highest,standing at about 225grams per person per week,increasing

similarly

 

 

 

intake= consumption

overtake 相交